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Magnolia & Nitr0gene

You can tell
From the scars on my arms
And the stains on my skirt
And the dents in my car
And the blisters on my lips
And the veins about to burst
That I'm not the carefullest of girls ~ Dresden Dolls

Updated following critique of the original shot

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:iconrattus-rat:
I do love the feel of this image, as I adore the song, I am glad to see it put into pictures. The only thing that really does bug me is the girl with the black hair looks a bit out of focus on her facial area, and the blur detracts from the overall feel of the image. Her entire body seems a bit out of focus compared to the girl up front, I don’t know if it is purposeful but personally I feel it takes away from your great portrayal of the song. I love the white-haired girls make-up, and the overall perspective of the image and I think you did a very good job overall!
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:iconchuckelz-bear:
amazing

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:iconphotoswithattitude:
Thanks Mr Chuck

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:iconchuckelz-bear:
twas nothing, I hope to get half the skills you have man with my photos

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:iconchoirwthasinglevoice:
Hmm, I see what Rattus-Rat was saying. I like the feel of the shot. The girl up front looks fantastic - I like her makeup, that her eyes are slightly out of focus, giving a doll-like look to her.

The girl in the back is a bit bothersome, though - not because of the model; she has a very intense expression on, possessive, and I like that. But I would have liked to see her slightly more out of focus or just not at all. When she's only mildly fuzzy like that, it IS a little distracting. It would have been interesting to see her with a bit more of a puppeteer pose as well - higher up, pulling the strings.

Very cool concept, though. I love that song. I'm just not sure how it applies to it?

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:icontriaxx2:
Awesome, though whoever is on top looks like a guy. I'm not sure why.

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:iconfemketje:
beautiful

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:iconanubishawk:
Fantastic shot. I love the whole concept, and the models are very beautiful.

I do love seeing your work.
:iconphotoswithattitude:
I waiting for the girls to pick their faves then I will post more from this set

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:iconphotoswithattitude:
glad you think so

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Apr 25, 2009, 1:16:29 PM

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